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This outtake is from the first hour of the beta-version of this workshop held last month in Orlando.  I only had 1 1/2 days to conver all 17 points on my copywriting checklist.  That was just not enough time to go an extra layer deep into every point.  And all of their sub-points.

In this workshop, May 2-4 in San Francisco, CA, we'll have 3 full days.  Plenty of time for you to learn my checklist and begin applying it to your own sales copy.

In this clip, I'm working with one of the attendees.  Helping him lay the groundwork for his basic sales message.